Music - ThallipOdAdhE - Opening music of my new song which is in progress

This is the opening music of my new song which was home recorded in my keyboard. The song is titled "ThallipOdAdhE". Thanks to Vasanth(my younger son) who played the lead.  The beats and BGM were played by me.Pl. give your comments.
Thalliptune by venkatram_vasi